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Today I woke up early and I have a good emotion.
The sun is too hot to cook an egg.
Maybe the weather is great but the TV says it will be rain.
Ouch!I saw the weather form the newspaper,it says today will rain
So I take my unbralla in my bag.
When I was taking bus ,there is something happended.
One bird was hit by a large car.
I thought about the bird could crash by any car.
So I walked into the road and I showed my hand\"five\",that meant \"stop\"
And I picked the bird up and let it stay near the tree.
Maybe I was bored to do that.
But the bird is an anima.
In the meantime,somebody around me said that I am a courage man to do one big thing
He has thought I will be a great person
I say this is a job who everyone could do
Then ,the weather changed, altho the weather is bad.
I am happy all the day by do one good thing.

出賣紐西蘭 · Accepted Answer

Today I woke up early and I have a good emotion.
今天我起得早，心情也很好

The sun is too hot to cook an egg.
太陽太大，以致於不能煎蛋

Maybe the weather is great but the TV says it will be rain.
或許天氣會很好，但電視說，會下雨

Ouch!I saw the weather form the newspaper,it says today will rain
喔，我是在報紙上看到氣象報導，說今天會下雨

So I take my unbralla in my bag.
所以我在手提袋裡放了把傘

When I was taking bus ,there is something happended.
當我搭公車時，事情發生了

One bird was hit by a large car.
一隻鳥被一台大車撞到

I thought about the bird could crash by any car.
我想，任何車都可能壓過這隻鳥

So I walked into the road and I showed my hand"five",that meant "stop"
於是我走到路中間，我伸直五隻手指，那表示「停」

And I picked the bird up and let it stay near the tree.
然後，我把那隻鳥撿起來，放到路邊的樹旁

Maybe I was bored to do that.
或許，我這樣做，實在很無聊

But the bird is an anima.
但那隻鳥是動物

In the meantime,somebody around me said that I am a courage man to do one big thing
就在這時候，身旁的人對我說，我是勇敢的人，將來會成就大事業

He has thought I will be a great person
他也說我是個好心人

I say this is a job who everyone could do
我想，這是每個人都會做的小事

Then ,the weather changed, altho the weather is bad.
然後，天變突然變了，雖然已經很糟

I am happy all the day by do one good thing.
我整天心情都很好，因為我做了一件好事

Charlene · Answer

Today I woke up early and I have a good emotion.
今天我很早就起床，而且心情很好。
The sun is too hot to cook an egg.
太陽熱到可以煎蛋了。
Maybe the weather is great but the TV says it will be rain.
也許這天氣很好但是電視上卻說將下雨。
Ouch!I saw the weather form the newspaper,it says today will rain
噢!我看到報紙上的天氣，也說今天會下雨。
So I take my unbralla in my bag.
所以我放了雨傘在我的包包裡。
When I was taking bus ,there is something happended.
正當我搭公車的時候，事情發生了。
One bird was hit by a large car.
一隻小鳥被一台大車撞到了。
I thought about the bird could crash by any car.
我想到這隻小鳥可能還會被任何車子撞到。
So I walked into the road and I showed my hand"five",that meant "stop"
因此我走到路上，作了一個"五"的手勢，表示"停車"。
And I picked the bird up and let it stay near the tree.
我撿起了這隻小鳥並讓牠待在靠近樹的地方。
Maybe I was bored to do that.
或許我厭煩做那。
But the bird is an anima.
但小鳥是一個生命。
In the meantime,somebody around me said that I am a courage man to do one big thing
這時，有人在身邊說我是個有膽量的人能去做大事。
He has thought I will be a great person
他覺得我將會是個偉大的人物。
I say this is a job who everyone could do
我說這是每個人都可以做到的事。
Then ,the weather changed, altho the weather is bad.
接著天氣改變了，雖然天氣不好。
I am happy all the day by do one good thing.
由於做了一件好事令我整天都很開心。

子 · Answer

今天我醒來得早並且我有好的心情.
太陽很熱, 熱可以煮雞蛋.
也許天氣很熱, 但是,  電視 說它將下雨.
哎喲!我從報紙看到天氣報導, 今天它將下雨.
所以我在我的提包中拿我的雨傘.
當我要去坐上公共汽車時, 發生了一些事情.
一隻鳥撞到了大車子.
我想這隻鳥可能會被車子撞傷.
所走到馬路上並且伸出我的手秀出"五", 意味著"停止".
然後我撿起小鳥把它放在樹邊.
也許我厭煩做這件事.
但是小鳥是一個生命.
在此期間, 在周遭的有人說我是做一件大事情的有勇氣英勇人.
他認為我將是偉大的人.
我說這是誰每個人都能做的一種工作.
改變的天氣,  雖然這種壞天氣.
做了這件事我一整天都很高興.

matilda · Answer

Today I woke up early and I have a good emotion.
今天我起得很早而且我的心情也很好。
The sun is too hot to cook an egg.
太陽很熱，熱到可以煮熟一個蛋。
Maybe the weather is great but the TV says it will be rain.
或許天氣很好但電視說今天將會下雨。
Ouch!I saw the weather form the newspaper,it says today will rain
噢!我從報紙上得知天氣情況，它說今天會下雨。
So I take my unbralla in my bag.
所以我拿了我的雨傘放入我的背包。
When I was taking bus ,there is something happended.
當我搭公車時，有件事發生了。
One bird was hit by a large car.
一部大車撞到了一隻鳥。
I thought about the bird could crash by any car.
我想這隻鳥可能會被其他車壓到。
So I walked into the road and I showed my hand"five",that meant "stop"
所以我無意中走進馬路，並出示我的五指，示意停。
And I picked the bird up and let it stay near the tree.
我撿起這隻鳥並將它放入附近的樹林中。
Maybe I was bored to do that.
也許我這麼做很蠢。
But the bird is an anima.
但這隻鳥也是一個生命。
In the meantime,somebody around me said that I am a courage man to do one big thing
同時，圍繞我的某人說我是做了一件大事的勇者。
He has thought I will be a great person
他認為我將成為一個很棒的人。
I say this is a job who everyone could do
我說這是一件任何一個人都有可能做到的事。
Then ,the weather changed, altho the weather is bad.
之後，天氣改變，變得很糟。
I am happy all the day by do one good thing.
我因為做了一件好事而高興了整天。

2006-02-24 11:25:39 補充：
這篇文章用了很多口語化的英文，感覺很有趣。

Jasmine · Answer

Today I woke up early and I have a good emotion.
今天我很早就起床了，心情很不錯。
The sun is too hot to cook an egg.
太陽大到可以煎蛋。
Maybe the weather is great but the TV says it will be rain.
現在看來似乎天氣很不錯，不過氣象報告說今天可能會下雨。
Ouch!I saw the weather form the newspaper,it says today will rain
澳!! 我也看過報紙上的氣象預報說今天會下雨
So I take my unbralla in my bag.
所以我把雨傘放進包包裡
When I was taking bus ,there is something happended.
搭公車時，有事情發生了
One bird was hit by a large car.
有隻小鳥被一台大型車撞到了
I thought about the bird could crash by any car.
我想的這隻鳥可能會被任何一台經過的車撞過去
So I walked into the road and I showed my hand"five",that meant "stop"
所以我走到路上對著車輛張開手掌比出 5 的手勢（表示停止），
And I picked the bird up and let it stay near the tree.
我把小鳥撿起來並把牠放在附近的樹上
Maybe I was bored to do that.
或許我這樣做有點無聊
But the bird is an anima.
但終究小鳥也是一隻動物
In the meantime,somebody around me said that I am a courage man to do one big thing
同時，有路人誇獎我很有勇氣做了一件好事
He has thought I will be a great person
牠覺得我是個大好人
I say this is a job who everyone could do
我說這樣的事每個人都能做呀
Then ,the weather changed, altho the weather is bad.
然而，天氣變了，變壞了
I am happy all the day by do one good thing.
今天做了件好事所以我很高興。

? · Answer

今天我起了大早而且我有好情緒。
太陽太熱，簡直可以煮一個蛋。
也許天氣是很好的，但是電視說它將是雨。
哎唷！我見到報紙上的天氣報告說今天將下雨
因此我在我的袋子中帶我的雨傘。
當我正在搭乘公共汽車的時候，有事情發生了 。
一隻鳥撞上一輛大的汽車了。
我想鳥可以讓任何汽車墜毀。
因此我走入了道路，而且我張開我的手比了個"五",那意謂了 "停止 "
而且我拾起鳥而且讓了它停留在樹的附近。
也許我做這件事情感到無聊。
但是鳥是一個生命。
在此際中，某人在我周圍說了我做一件大的事物是有勇氣的男人
他已經認為我將是偉大的人
我說這是一個工作每個人可以做
然後，天氣改變，雖然天氣很壞。
但是我卻整天都很快樂因為我被一件好事物影響。

Aaron · Answer

Today I woke up early and I have a good emotion.
我今天很早起，心情也很好。
The sun is too hot to cook an egg.
太陽熱到可以煮蛋了。
Maybe the weather is great but the TV says it will be rain.
或許天氣很好，但電視說會下雨。
Ouch!I saw the weather form the newspaper,it says today will rain
噢！我從報紙上看到氣象報導，它說今天會下雨。
So I take my unbralla in my bag.
所以我應該放把雨傘在包包裡。
When I was taking bus ,there is something happended.
當我搭公車時，發生了一件事。
One bird was hit by a large car.
有隻鳥被一輛大車撞到了。
I thought about the bird could crash by any car.
我想那隻鳥可能會被車子輾碎。
So I walked into the road and I showed my hand"five",that meant "stop"
所以我走到馬路上，伸出我的五指，表示停車。
And I picked the bird up and let it stay near the tree.
然後我撿起那隻鳥，把牠放到樹木附近。
Maybe I was bored to do that.
或許我是無聊才這麼做的吧。
But the bird is an anima.
但鳥也是個生命。
In the meantime,somebody around me said that I am a courage man to do one big thing
在同時，某個在我附近的人對我說，做這一件大事的我，是一個有勇氣的人。
He has thought I will be a great person
他認為我是一個好人。
I say this is a job who everyone could do
我說這每個人都可以辦得到呀
Then ,the weather changed, altho the weather is bad.
然後，天氣變了，雖然天氣不好。
I am happy all the day by do one good thing.
但我卻因為做了件好事而高興一整天。

? · Answer

大家翻的內容大致沒什麼問題, 不過原文有些表達用法不對喔!
1. 要用had, 之後有多處時態都要改成過去式
   心情好應該用I was in good mood.或是 Ｉwas happy.

2.熱到可以煮蛋: It's hot enough for cooking eggs.

3.it will rain.
4.看報紙是用read不是用saw
5.今天會下雨 it will rain today.

6."put" my unbrella in my bag
  把雨傘放到包包裏要用put
7.搭巴士/公車 taking the bus
8.something happened就可以了
  there is 要去掉
9.thought後的about要去掉
10.walked towards the bird 或
    walked in the middle of
   the road
11.five "fingers" to the
   driver
12.amimal

13.by doing

(很有創意的文章, I LIKE IT!)

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