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Hello~ dear uncles and aunties, I am pleasure to be here to introduce my
country and me. First, I want to thank my parents and rotary international, because of offering me this chance.
My name is Tina. You can call me Jessica, too. This name is chose by myself, and I like it more than Tina. That’s because Tina means dainty and little, then my biggest taboo is that people say I am a short person. So, I
prefer you to call me Jessica.
I’m 16, but most of people think I only have 13. Although they said
wasn’t because of my height. And I’m born in Taiwan, where is
called “Formosa”, my rotary international is Hsin-chu Lily.
There have 4 people in my family, this is my dad, my mom, my younger brother and me.
My dad is a scientist, who is crazy about math and exercise.
Unfortunately, my math is bad, so he is always worried about it. But
other classes I can handle them well.
My mom is a businesswoman, who is busy all the time. She is
independent and clever.
My brother is 15.but everyone thinks that he is older than me, he’s skin is darker than the other Taiwanese. Actually, we don’t any similarity on looks. My friends were shock when they knew that he is my brother.
I don’t like to read books at all, especially textbook, but I really like to
exercise, like swimming, volleyball and racket.
Taiwan is between China and Pacific Ocean. Its area has 36,000 km², population has 23 millions. It is a populous island.
Its capital is Taipei, which has the tallest tower in the world. That finished in 2004.
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Hello~ dear uncles and aunties, I am pleasure to be here to introduce my
country and myself [介紹我自己這個人, 不是我喔!]. First, I want to thank to [記得介係詞] my parents and rotary international, because they [because of 在這裡用有點千強] offer me this great chance. [或者你可以說: because it is them that offering me this chance.]
My name is Tina. You can call me Jessica. [不用too] This name is chose by myself, and I like it more than Tina. That’s because Tina means dainty and little, then my biggest taboo is that people say I am a short person. [你可以說: it might make people think that I am a short little girl]So, I prefer you to call me Jessica.
I’m 16, but most of people think I'm [年紀不能用have來形容喔] only 13. Although they said it [said後面省略 that, 但主詞不可省] wasn’t because of my height. [不用and, 前一句跟這一句有關才用and]I’m born in Taiwan, where is called “Formosa”, my rotary international is Hsin-chu Lily. There are [有多少人, 不是用have, 別用中文來翻喔] 4 people in my family: [句子來沒結束, 所以不可以重複主詞, 直接用冒號]my dad, my mom, my younger brother and I.
2007-04-28 04:19:48 補充：
因為一直參數錯誤, 所以就打不進去ㄟ
2007-04-28 04:21:43 補充：
因為補充內容太多好像打不進去, 需要的話可以e-mail或到我的網站留言, 我在回覆你
2007-04-28 04:22:33 補充：
My dad is a scientist, who is crazy about math and exercise.
Unfortunately, my math is bad, so he is always worried about it. But as to (但若說到其他科目的話, 要銜接好喔) other classes I can handle them well.
2007-04-28 04:23:35 補充：
My mom那句沒錯
My brother is 15, but everyone thinks that he is older than me, he’s skin is darker than other (不用the, 因為你是在說比普遍的台灣人黑, 沒有特定哪一個) Taiwanese.
2007-04-28 04:24:15 補充：
Actually, we don’t have (don’t 是助動詞, 要搭配動詞喔~這裡加have) any similarities (any + 複數名詞) in appearance (沒有on look這個詞喔).
2007-04-28 04:24:54 補充：
My friends were shocked (被你們相差的外表嚇到, 所以是被動) when they knew that he is my brother.
2007-04-28 04:25:44 補充：
......
2007-04-28 04:26:16 補充：
but I really like to exercise, such as (會比較順) swimming, playing (呼應前面的swimming, 所以要有個+ing的動詞)
2007-04-28 04:27:27 補充：
貼到無力, 剩下了請到我網站留言ㄅ, 我會告訴你, 那樣比較快
Hello~ dear uncles and aunties, I am pleasured to be here to introduce my country and myself. First of all, I want to thank my parents and rotary international, because they offered the chance to me to be here.
My name is Tina. You can also call me Jessica. "Jessica" was chosen by myself, and I like it better than "Tina". Tina means dainty and little, and I don't want others to see me as a short person, that's why. So, I
prefer you to call me Jessica.
I'm 16, though most people think that I'm only 13, not because of my height. In addition, I born in Taiwan, where people call it "Formosa”, and my rotary international is Hsin-chu Lily.
There are 4 people in my family, my dad, my mom, my younger brother and I. My dad is a scientist, who is crazy about math and exercises.
Unfortunately, my math isn't as good as my bad, and he is always worried about that. However, I can handle other subjects well.
My mom is a businesswoman, who is busy all the time. She is
independent and clever.
My brother is 15. But everyone thinks that he looks older than me, his skin is darker than other Taiwanese.(這段內容本身其實不通順) Actually, we don't have any similarity on our looks. My friends were all shocked when they saw my brother.
What's more, I don’t like to read books at all, especially textbook. On the other hand, I like exercise, such as swimming, playing volleyball and racket(or tennis?).
Taiwan is between China and Pacific Ocean. It has 36,000 km² and 23 millions people. It is a dense island.
The capital is Taipei, where standing the tallest tower in the world, 101 building, which finished in 2004.