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發問者 茹蓉 (Lv.2) ・2008 年 10 月 30 日 ・語言

可以幫我糾正一下文法嗎?因為是要SPEECH用的,謝謝各位。 People think dog is man's best friend, so many people likes raise dogs and they think dogs are very cute and can understand people's what to say. I also very like dogs, because dog really cute and when i have a bad mood, it can listen to me quietly and no argue. when i need to accompany with me, it always by my side. also a spot of bother, for exapmle: wool always fall around my room. but i think that's a small problems. nowadays, a lot of abandoned dogs, i feel sad. dogs just like babies need to love. i hope everybody don't abondon own's dog.

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People think dog is man's best friend, so many people likes raise dogs and they think dogs are very cute and can understand people's what to say. People think dog is the best friend to human beings. so many people like to raise dogs and think that they are cute and smart to understant what people said. I also very like dogs, because dog really cute and when i have a bad mood, it can listen to me quietly and no argue. I like dogs very much as well, because they are really cute and when I in the bad mood, they can listen to me quietly and won't argue with me. when i need to accompany with me, it always by my side. When I need an accompany, my dog is always by my side. also a spot of bother, for exapmle: wool always fall around my room. There is something bad about the dogs , such as their hair is everywhere in my room but i think that's a small problems. However, this is not a bid deal. nowadays, a lot of abandoned dogs, i feel sad. Recently, I feel sad because there are more and more abandoned dogs, dogs just like babies need to love. Dogs are just like babies need to be loved. i hope everybody don't abondon own's dog. So , i wish that no more people will abandon their dogs.
Suahua(Lv.3) 2008 年 10 月 30 日
Hi, i would do it for you if you'd offer more points....hehhee ;)
jojo(Lv.3) 2008 年 10 月 30 日

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