急~~10點~~幫我看有沒有文法的錯誤~~
So Theseus become king of Athens, a most wise and disinterested king. There were no other enemy entered Attica as long as Theseus lived. He had many other adventures, and made a best friend in his life.
Take11 Character： Pirithous、Theseus、
Pirithous：Due to my bride’ death, I would try to get the most carefully guarded lady in all the universe.
Theseus：Who is？
Pirithous：None other than Persephone.
Theseus：I’ll company you.
這是我們要演出的劇本~~
1. 有無文法錯誤
2.或有更好的說法
3.時態的正確與否
4.中文翻英文
5.有些old language幫我改成modern language
不要翻譯網站~~
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And so Theseus became king of Athens, the most wise and disinterested king. No other enemies entered Attica for as long as Theseus lived. He lived through many other adventures, and met a best friend in his life.
Take11 Character： Pirithous、Theseus、
Pirithous：Due to my bride's death, I will try to get the most carefully guarded lady in the universe.
Theseus：Who is it？
Pirithous：No one else than Persephone.
Theseus：I'll acompany you.